What does "show not tell" means?
How can we re-write these sentences using "show not tell"?
1. "The buildings were tall", 2. "Sarah was really upset", 3. "She was so happy to see him", 4. "The lake was beautiful"
1. The buildings looked like a bunch of shaquille o'neil's.
2. sarah face was a fast flowing river.
3. her cheeks raised with that sparkle in her eye.
4. The lake was a reflection of the sky.
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